SALINI NAIR

Bronze Star - 6,475 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

A journey that continues


This way looks so consistent
Turn is not visible and looks polished
Flair of journey masked it for a while
A jostle can expect anyway
Liberal montages are inside
Started with a haste and fervor
But fluke was ephemeral in that way
The cobble is spread here and there
Turn was not visible with some fog
Slump to pit and heard a pink
Rest is not prim in their way
Riot on way was so rude
Fear ruined spell in a strange way
Life is like a travel itself
A voyage of known to unknown….

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Friday, February 14, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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Comments about this poem (A journey that continues by SALINI NAIR )

  • Gold Star - 15,329 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (10/17/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    Very insightful and it's a fact that life is a journey full of turns and pits and full of thorns and roses.......beautifully
    crafted (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,595 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/21/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    The end result of the life is clearly pin pointed in beautiful poem which is somewhat philosophical and somewhat reality in real life situations. A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,475 Points Salini Nair (4/13/2014 8:35:00 AM)

    life is like a journey....where need to meet turns and and pits.......................... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,475 Points Salini Nair (4/13/2014 8:23:00 AM)

    life is like a travel where met with many turns and pits............ (Report) Reply

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