Deb Panda

Rookie - 178 Points (1992 / KEONJHAR, ODISHA, INDIA)

A Lasting Smile!


Oh Muse!
You came today-to this barren land, with thunderbolt!
Breaking the crust of infertile thoughts!
That separates the majesty and priest-
Worshipped! On stately clouds, infant forests.

With poised gait, cleanse the dust,
Piercing through the lies, lengths futile
Disappear, glass doesn't bear the crack-
Of silent mighty, devotee of his soul.

Beautiful! Sands bear her signature-
As rain lashed at the tired green sense-
Whose scriptures were her sight,
Fixed! Affirmed his beaming conscience!

Poignant! Stunned with mirthful arrival-
In spirit of a shooter, broke all,
Bondages, for the lagged spirit
Awaken, clouds colliding for lasting smile!

Submitted: Sunday, August 03, 2014

Topic of this poem: Love


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To-...P5.. Oh Muse! ! ! You came today....Overjoyed for your blessed arrival..... On eve of today's auspicious ocasion plz find this...

(Of course everyday is auspicious for me, as long as I connect to that stream of eternal bliss, U have blessed.....)

Comments about this poem (A Lasting Smile! by Deb Panda )

  • Bronze Star - 7,236 Points Neela Nath (8/24/2014 9:15:00 AM)

    You are blessed soul.Your Muse is showering blessings on your head.Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,039 Points Hazel Durham (8/3/2014 9:26:00 AM)

    Firstly, amazing imagery, awestruck abut your everlasting smiling muse that leaves you breathless about her mystique and aura!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

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