A Legacy Of Love Poem by Dr subhendu kar

A Legacy Of Love

Rating: 5.0


simply a query by the desire divine
as the night hides from the day by the darkness
legacy when transferred by the gleams of love
the clone yet fledges by the blooms again

yet I know when unknowable
the light as when mystical glow
by the warmth of legacy as juxtaposed
even besotted by the quivering jolt

love eternal simply reappears by the blue
trust when truth and time is the belief
the love yet incarnated by the semblance
jingles may reason true moment when glimmers

resonance seems to be slow when disinterred
never being befuddled by the grace when guiled
tears may pierce the heart by the blood
cry when shatters the strength when jitters

light yet pattered by the rays when glued
the blue never be jilted from the moon
warmth still exists by the sun even in hide
the deep night when reposed somewhere

events yet croon by the history
leading the knackered to the glimpse
autumn when shadowed passion still respires
clouds seem to whisper the speckles of rain

earth yet transpires by the sorrow
smiles when tumble by the soul
yet the novels of night as tucked away
tryst when leads the vanquished by the legacy of love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Stellar work, Doctor....Resplendent imagery, and even-flow structure, keystone this pen-gem.... ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Thad Wilk 03 April 2008

The legacy of love, eternal, an always reappearing fact of life! *10*! ! Best regards! ! Friend Thad

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Abha Sharma 03 April 2008

love eternal simply reappears by the blue trust when truth and time is the belief Thoughtful, deep, philosophical and yet mellifluous language so much is precipitated while reading these lines….

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Alison Cassidy 04 April 2008

Your throw words like confetti upon the page and they land with grace and abandonment. Your love blossoms in all seasons and your pen relishes the music of the language you employ with such devotion. Beautiful tender-hearted verse. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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David Desantis 07 April 2008

Extremely beautiful, well written and enjoyable. Thise is one of the better poems i've written on here. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 April 2010

‘…earth yet transpires by the sorrow/smiles when tumble by the soul/yet the novels of night as tucked away /tryst when leads the vanquished by the legacy of love ‘ A melancholy mellow…rich with vivid biblio metaphor… Like eye-ear-candy …in this world of sorrows still…and sorrow become magnanimous… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rachel Butler 11 October 2009

events yet croon by the history Rachel Ann Butler

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

The poem has magical and inspiring imagery. A beautiful poem!

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Andrew Blakemore 20 April 2008

Beautiful syntax and lovely words. Excellent verse. Andrew

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Rani Turton 17 April 2008

'clouds seem to whisper the speckles of rain' was my favourite line, but there were many other magnificent ones. Thanks.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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