A Letter To You Poem by Negar Gorji

A Letter To You

Rating: 4.3


Dear sweet heart
When I am upset
Do you know what I think of?
I think when you come back
I won't be upset anymore
I think nothing can bother me
Since you are next to me
When you come
I think I can do anything
In the world
And smile
This is what makes my heart beat
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But most of the time it bothers me
Because most days of the year
I am alone and upset
And can't do anything
I need to get out of this dreamland
I need to tear this old cocoon
And walk out of this world
I want you to help me!
Please take my hand
I don't want this world.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
missing you again and need to see you.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 30 July 2015

a bit dark and despondent and appears to lose hope to the conclusion. but emotive and strong lines... immersed and drenched in longing and yearning crave! liked

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Chinedu Dike 27 December 2014

A nice train of thoughts well encapsulated into a love poem. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Bhavna Singh 07 February 2014

gud one....... i like it soo much

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 04 February 2014

nice one. puts me in a sea of thoughts perfect.

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