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** A Life **

Your hidden jellylike fleshes irritate
My little warm brother
Embracing your inner organisms
Authenticating the friendliness
Adorable of pinky madness
Stumbled upon the insertion
Lava flowing with enriched
Armageddon of nutritious juices
Like driving down
The alley of Mount Everest
The reason why mankind
Existence is penultimate
We cannot erase
The pleasure
A life

Submitted: Thursday, April 24, 2008
Edited: Saturday, June 21, 2008


Comments about this poem (** A Life ** by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof )

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  • Ro'ya Abdulaal (9/2/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    Well, the title caught my attention and the poem is simply beautiful. Well done

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  • Nikunj Sharma (8/10/2009 7:56:00 AM)

    life is one, pleasures are many, including the ones mentioned here..........read my poem called MAGNETS

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  • Obed Souza (7/15/2009 7:56:00 PM)

    Life is self-breeding! It has always umpredictable ways to show us the wonders of love.
    Lovely poem!

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  • Broken Heart (7/13/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    very nyc poem! ! keep it up! !

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  • Kristina B; Williams (7/11/2009 3:56:00 PM)

    no words needed to describe this 1..10s again for #6....see i told you i will pay you back for the favor which is no favor at all..need the comment n the votes..im lacking

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/27/2009 12:34:00 PM)

    'We cannot erase
    The pleasure
    A life'

    Marvelous short poem on life.
    Last lines are amazing.

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  • Lady Grace (6/14/2009 6:11:00 PM)

    we can't erase the pleasure in life..nice expression..congrats for this top marks..grace

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  • Subroto Chatterjee (6/13/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    '...'We cannot erase, The pleasure, A life..' So true. Including the pain too.
    Cheers.
    Subroto

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  • Riquetta Elliott (2/13/2009 10:35:00 AM)

    This very excellent Mr. Yusof descibinh about life. Great job.

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  • Christine Kerr (2/8/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    Wow, I never knew that the act could be explained so well. Thankyou

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