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A Life without Life

A life, a journey
without passion and affection
emptiness inside
gloominess outside
dreams fly away
reality is a blur

A life, a journey
without passion and affection
lying outside
dying inside
holding on to a belief
nothing but a dust

A life, a journey
without passion and affection
time passed by
nothing gained everything lost

Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2008
Edited: Friday, April 18, 2008


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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/21/2008 4:49:00 AM)

    hey....this is death................but not yet.....not yet

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  • Bless Villena (4/18/2008 5:33:00 PM)

    i can relate to the feeling of emptiness captured in this piece...simple yet haunting

  • James B. Earley (4/17/2008 6:36:00 AM)

    Life....simply a series of lessons....and so much to be gleaned! Best wishes.......

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