Treasure Island

Joe McIntyre


A Love gone sour, Welcome to Hell


To fall in Love, then go through hell



If you fall in Love, and things go wrong

You'll then understand, a sad country song


Your heart will shatter, you will matter no more.

your nerves will tremble, your heart at war.


To be without, the one you love so

will tear you to pieces, body, heart and soul.


You will wonder why? what are you living for?

Welcome to hell Sir. the Love you had, is no more.


You will serve your time, in a place called hell,

and to no one, you will ever tell.


You vow to never, Never love one again..

cause in Love, is where hell can began


So you give to you, this single oath,

It's a shame what has happened to you both



To no body, you will ever tell.

It's time to pay, the price is pure hell.


Your hearts been torn, dreams are no more,

Your hearts been shattered, by the closing of a door




I write this for all of those that are hurting, because of a lost Love.. What a horrible thing to go through..



Joe McIntyre 03/28/2013

Submitted: Thursday, March 28, 2013
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I wrote this after a Woman I was dating, said goodbye to me.. I gave her my all, but it wasn't enough..

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