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Don Mcwilliams
(2/22/2008 11:22:00 AM) |
Uh huh, done that. Just wonderful. Lori. More, please...
Regards,
Don
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David Dennis
(11/11/2006 10:55:00 PM) |
Holy hell. This is staggering. Gems one after the other.
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Brian Dorn
(10/17/2006 3:24:00 PM) |
A masterful write, Lori... hope your brain never runs out of paper.
Brian
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Raymond Wright
(10/17/2006 10:29:00 AM) |
Another beautifully written poem. Just wonderful!
~Ray
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Howard Moore
(10/4/2006 10:47:00 AM) |
I gave it a 10, I thought it was going in a diffrent direction, , , , , Than what I anticipated
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John Kay
(10/4/2006 9:06:00 AM) |
Lori...I think this is great, except for the 5th stanza, which took me away from the situation (it could be dropped) , and the last three lines would be better in a couplet, which would be easy to organize without losing anything. Take care, John
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