A Message Poem by Mallika Achuthan Menon

A Message

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Zenith of joy
Lilt of life
Golden past
Gondolier
of jollity
My deepest bond
More than a friend
My comfort zone
Abode of love
A helping hand
A guide for doubts
An aid in needs
Asset of mine
A God send gift
A tacid melody
Virtue's goodwill
World of mine
Heaven on earth
Were you dear...

But....

Enroute in the life journey
twists and turns
asunder us.
Is it our fate
or a fault?
am still groping
in the dark.
Loss arrayed
nightmares
sleeplessness just
made me insane.
Not a single
dawn or dusk
blooms or withers
sans your thought
Vaccum creates
vapidness
Perspective in
life is vague.
Woes vanquish
vale of peace
Regret, despair
ruling me.
Days are running
Me too moving
Both are rolling
one after one.
Miss you a lot
Wish you good luck
My silent prayers
For you ever!
................

Friday, June 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice one..10 So wish honestly And pray dearly For comfortable stay Wherever he is or stays away

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 04 June 2016

Verily, a poem that expresses emotions in their positive and negative attributes

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2016

i was astonished by your use of words conveying all that you want............. first part was very positive and lots of aspirations, wishes, love........ but in the second part..... sad emotions, sense of loss, love and life faced with problems......regret, despair, vacuum, vapidness, twist and turns...... i really enjoyed reading our poem....... that is life..... a real picture of life that we all go through........ thank you very much for this great poem. tony

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Kishore Kumar Das 03 June 2016

This message is for your love......in between your golden past and despair-ridden present perhaps you are searching yourself......your emotions have been nicely reflected in your verses...

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Sekharan Pookkat 03 June 2016

itches heart throbs mind blooms withers soul absconded- thanks for sharing

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