Joseph Narusiewicz

Freshman - 1,173 Points (9/29/50 / So St Paul, Minnesota)

A Minor


Ravenous sorrow a sculpture of indifference
Illusions like a wake of dark red purple draperies
We are the expectations of a grandiose prayer
Nothing real breathes for long
Pour your joy from streams of time
These cracks in the broken wall
Your love is a distant summer
Kiss me until I know the stars love me
Do you ever feel the cold until you’re numb?
I know you are my mirror
I know we are a couple of minor chords
People need me and I need people
Let’s keep each other warm?
At least as warm as we can be
I always liked A minor

Submitted: Wednesday, January 04, 2012
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  • Rookie - 12 Points Tsira Gogeshvili (1/14/2012 12:08:00 AM)

    We are the expectations of a grandiose prayer
    ...........................................................
    Your love is a distant summer
    Kiss me until I know the stars love me
    .............................................................
    I know we are a couple of minor chords
    ................................................................
    I liked this minor -sincere poem which has placed inside itself many remarkable poetic- pearls... 10....XXX
    Tsira (Report) Reply

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