A Night With Her Beauty - Poem by SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

A night with her beauty

It was a icy night and
i was very near to her
It was a bank of a river and
we were alone of that bank
We talked in our silence and
enjoyed that night by watching
that night slipped in to dawn
Still we didn’t have any motion
We were in the world of romance
where the moon and stars were very near to us
Sun came on the sky and
sent his heat to separate us
We were still in our eyes and
our hearts and minds failed to realize
The changes happened around us
We were still as a picture
Up to the arrival of villagers
I was with her beauty and
she was with my love
We were mingled in love and
went to a new world of romance

Comments about A Night With Her Beauty by SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

  • Rookie - 57 Points Ratnakar Rout (11/3/2009 6:43:00 AM)

    A good sensuous poem, very lucidly pictured, flows like a stream and conveys many things........... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie rago rago (10/31/2009 1:09:00 AM)

    very nice and tender....................... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 31, 2009

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