Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 453 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

A Path To Salvation - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Doctors were running for that sick man, he was near the red line
They assume he was in this situation because of his crime
Under all the crimes, under all the nasty actions and contracts it was his sign
There was no hope for this guilty man; we won't see him again fine! !
For forgetting these days and these nightmares, he drank wine…..

A path to salvation requires no lie
We should be powerful in the path of salvation to not die
In the other place, we will wake up with the people hi!
Without any time killing, without any time wasting, we should hei!
A nebular rainy way, with our pure wings, we have this opportunity to fly!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

it; s the story of some of us who are just looking for a way to be free, but they still don't let themselves to be free!

Comments about A Path To Salvation by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/14/2013 7:40:00 AM)

    we have this opportunity to fly!
    ha ha ha ha......i love this line....its full of hope and remind me of my place as a human in the universe.....i feel better now after reading this poem specially because of the last line! ! ! ! i will write this line with biiiiiiig words and put it in ma room! ! ! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (8/16/2013 5:02:00 AM)

    If the path to salvation was strsight and narrow we.would not need wings.
    But it is crooked and has cross roads that are obscured by fog and night.
    And it is only a path because it is little traveled, not a super highway.
    And there are no road signs to encourage one along the way.
    Just a single foot path little used and overgrown. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (9/6/2012 1:08:00 PM)

    Truly visionary,10+++++++++. You are indeed a messenger of universal truth, love and beauty. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, August 13, 2012

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