Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 211 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Poor Frogs.


The story of Poor Frogs:

Once there was a lake that was the haven of the frogs
Frogs which were bothered by the snakes and the dogs

They were eaten by the snakes; the snakes were hunting that lake
And the frogs had no way out to save themselves, satanic snakes.

But there was still a way, White storks!
Yeah, in their ideas the storks will work…

Storks started to hunt the snakes, they hunted them all
And the frogs were happy, and they saw the snake's fall

But……...the time isn't loyal to no one
And it was the time for the Frog's run

Soon there was no food for the hunter white storks
The storks decided to eat the frogs with their forks

In our life, sometimes we will face with some cases
The cases with different people and different faces

We still don't know who will hurt us, our friends or the enemies?
Enemies will bring us down, our the friends will bring us down on our knees?

Submitted: Monday, October 08, 2012
Edited: Monday, October 08, 2012

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Hi to all dear readers. I hope you enjoy this work

I ask you all to answer the question that is at the end of this poem

Thank you so much.

Comments about this poem (Poor Frogs. by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A) )

  • Gold Star - 6,809 Points Bri Edwards (10/13/2013 3:42:00 PM)

    howdy ellias, i loved the lines:

    Soon there was no food for the hunter white storks
    The storks decided to eat the frogs with their forks

    not only do the lines have a great rhyme, but it is also (to me) funny to use the word forks (i wonder if the storks had knives as well? spoons?) , and the poem also demonstrates how situations can change so quickly from bad to good to bad etc. but i think the frogs were deluding themselves if they ever really thought the storks were frog-friends.
    people should, for peace of mind, i think, have faith that their friends won't hurt them. people should also be wary of the actions of their enemies. BUT, as some others have said, it is possible to be hurt by friends (hopefully not purposely) . sometimes the hurt caused by a friend is for the good. the hurt from an enemy is more likely to be a REAL HURT. i mean like a broken leg or a burned down house! thanks for sharing.
    unfortunately it seems that a lot off damage is now done to frog populations unwittingly by humans. : ( bri (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (12/7/2012 10:05:00 AM)

    So true..... in life its hard to judge whoz who (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (11/7/2012 9:54:00 PM)

    true past we lived future we want to live but present we are living but still there are many surprises yet to come
    a great story from a lovely poet ...

    thank you for sharing
    love
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (11/6/2012 7:21:00 PM)

    Also points out the need to solve our own problems and not rely on someone else (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (11/5/2012 4:52:00 AM)

    A really evokative piece of writing, first i couldn't help consider the food cycle (i know thats not specifically where you were heading) but my mind laced that thought for a while...how nature can re-evaluate the needs of species and let them evolve for their survival needs and also the frogs maybe became too successful...
    Then the other angle who will hurt us most friend or enemy, we do not expect much from our enemy so in most skip around the edge scenarios, they can never hurt us as much as our friends as we hope and expect our friends to be compassionate and to understand us, know our weaknesses and avoid them....but in reality either can hurt as much as the other, just depends how far they are willing to go. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 165 Points Zahra Shariat (11/3/2012 5:42:00 AM)

    don't you think the cycle of life is a suitable title for this lovely poem? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Scotty Dogg (11/1/2012 5:24:00 PM)

    Nice poem. I say don't trust anyone you can't throw 20 feet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (10/19/2012 12:01:00 AM)

    Your genuine stand is inspirational. The future is what matters, so what we do today will truly shape our destiny.
    Its a real deep thought and the literal meed of any being.Well done! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (10/18/2012 10:27:00 PM)

    A nice message gently came through my mind....I enjoy your example story
    In our life....nothing is unpredictable..everything can change within moments without much expect..
    Great job___I enjoy this! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (10/16/2012 4:20:00 AM)

    I know the answer, who will hurt us friend or enemy, both can hurt us in different angle and shot but the most terrible thing is we can get hurt by ourself..self...because we decide a thing and that will make a different. If we fall we will stand tall again if only we wnat to wake up, need to be independent without friend and enemy..but surely true friend is worthy...will not try to hurt you...but opportunist friend will always take advantage over you_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (10/13/2012 12:17:00 PM)

    first of all i would like to say it is so brilliant.what a nice idea.
    i believe u r right. some times we faced the enemies but we have to care our backs cause the one who are going to stab us from our backs sometimes is one of our friends.
    the best friends of us sometimes may be our enemies.
    tnx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Terry O'leary (10/13/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    With enemies, we should be forewarned... with 'friends' we sometimes are caught unawares... Terry (good poem) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (10/12/2012 1:14:00 PM)

    friends, enemies...the duality of creation, both sides working as one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruth Fumble (10/9/2012 6:26:00 AM)

    wow... nicely written Ellias :) good job my friend (Report) Reply

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