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Cody Christiansen

(1993 / MN)

a Path to Take


A path can lead you in many directions like love or death.
So let the tears rain from the ones in pain
and yet he still walks a path filled with sorrow
so he trys to drink the pain away even his daughter stands in the back trying to save the one that gave her life.
Now she crys in pain while he drinks himself to death.
And all she can do is stand and whatch unless he changes
and lets go everything for the daughter that he once loved.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Edited: Saturday, October 27, 2012
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