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Ravi Sathasivam


A peace of mind...


When I wake up from my bed in the morning
My saturate eyes open slowly and welcomes the morning sun
Then I feel warm and comfortable at peace of mind
The morning smell of the earth reminds me my childhood
The wetness of flora brings me cool breeze.
I was born in this universe with peaceful nature around me
Then, I always felt that I was a star on my own brightness.
Learned, the love and kindness brings me a peace of mind
Learned, the prayers for God brings me a peace of mind
Learned, the help for helpless brings me a peace of mind
Learned, the life of peace brings me a peace of mind
When my saturate eyes close slowly and welcomes the silent night
Then I fall sleep comfortably at peace of mind while praying God
to have another peaceful day.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 19, 2004
Edited: Friday, April 09, 2010

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  • Kannan G (4/3/2010 1:56:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem expressing your peace with peace! Excellent.
    Read mine.............. “The Other Side” (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    With foldinghands and prayers in mind,
    ambition and wish for good day find,
    let sun rise again with rays so kind,
    All with fortunes and eyes blind........ good write dear....10 (Report) Reply

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