A Perfect Whole Poem by Charlie Annalls

A Perfect Whole

Rating: 4.5


I believe in mountains,
You believe in clouds.

I speak very softly,
You shout awfully loud.

I'm the gentle tones of flute,
You're the bells that rang.

It may be that I am yin,
And maybe you are yang.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malcolm Blake-lawson 08 December 2006

Nice one, Annalls, I love your use of contrasting opposites; simple but very effective.

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Charlie Annalls

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Hampshire UK
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