A Personal Vision Poem by Daniel Brick

A Personal Vision

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We have lost the cosmos. The sun strengthens us no more,
neither does the moon... Now we have to get back the
cosmos, and it can't be done by a trick. The great range
of responses that have fallen dead in us have to come to
life again.
from APOCALYPSE by D. H. Lawrence

The time, we say, is ripe...
and we see that ripeness everywhere:
the fruit filled with juice, a day
approaching its apogee, a storm
threatening coastal cities, a star
aging toward implosion. So the moment
arrives and what cannot be postponed,
occurs. I suppose trying to ignore
this moment is futile, and diminishing
its importance is beyond my ability, but
to simply wait as this future moment
and its convulsive beauty looms before me
and an invisible clock closes the distance
between myself and its arrival is unbearable,
which is to say, it is inhuman.

I am only a single voice, but that
in itself is more than one. Each time
I speak I lodge that voice into the mesh
of things. It cannot be ignored
by other beings, or other things. So -
when the fruit falls, when day darkens into night,
when the storm is averted, when a star is
reduced to star-dust, time fulfills its
mission, and I record time's precise and
thorough action. Time loses its mystery
for me in such fateful moments: it becomes
just another blind force in a universe that
worships force. Oh, when will one of
the higher beings descend to intervene
and impose a peaceful poise in our world?

Imagine a universe of stillness:
when time collapses into eternity, change
stops wearing new masks to hide the monotony
of its endless cycle of the same events
year after year, when Good detaches Evil
from its nature, and presides over
the withering of its deflated being.
And the Sun and the Moon shower us with
spiritual light in all our times. And
the prophecies of the END TIME will be
fulfilled without the violence our seers
could not reason past. Instead of destruction,
there will be something like a whisper
rushing through the space of our new existence,
confiding in our hearts, Fear not. Be at peace.

Tuesday, July 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: myth,vision
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 15 July 2016

I am only a single voice....your single voice echoes in every soul. With you the reader is also imagining a universe of stillness and hears in his heart the words Fear not. Be at peace. This is an incredible philosophical write that reflects on human existence and man's relation with the universe. You have quoted the words of D.H. Lawrence in the beginning, one of my favorite writers and you have carried forward his thoughts n ruminations in the most splendid way. The concept of Apocalypse has fascinated man always. Where Lawrence's words forecast a terrible end, yours try to find hope and bliss. A thoroughly gripping work that needs many reads to get to its depth. A perfect 10.

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Daniel Brick 15 July 2016

Thank you for this Nosheen. I'm happy we find ourselves on the same wave-length. Poetry allows you to say BIG things in a small format, but a sensitive reader of poetry like yourself sees the big theme. It's good to kmow we will be on the same side of the Universe whatever happens. Lawrence is one of my favorite novelists too. I've read WOMEN IN LOVE three times.

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Kelly Kurt 12 July 2016

Wonderfully written. You are a classic poet. something I can only hope one day to be

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