R.K Das

(22, january / INDIA)

A Poem


Do I belong? I question myself
One more time anxiously, while
Waiting for permission to script
A preface to passionate musing
Called life..! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

My maiden flight into the
untitled world of desire
Lands softly on the
Flowerbed of compassion.

Nobody knows how long
I am going to stay here
And now at the level crossing
Of the dream road.

Like a few drops of dew
Frozen in wait for
The perennial touch of dawn
That is yet to dissolve the
Substantial shadow of doubts.

Ah! You didn't know? Asks the time
As i stood visibly confused
About the fading life-line
Caught in the cycle of rebirth
Preparing for its return journey.

Submitted: Thursday, September 06, 2012
Edited: Thursday, September 06, 2012

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  • Bronze Star - 7,404 Points Valsa George (11/7/2012 11:02:00 PM)

    This preface to' passionate musings' sets the stage for a great opening! No need of any doubt whether you belong! Beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points C. P. Sharma (11/6/2012 12:56:00 AM)

    A profound self search and a great poem. Each dawn is a bench mark on the time frame until the eternal Dawn. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 113 Points Karen Sinclair (10/17/2012 3:08:00 AM)

    A fine write which has me considering the many tentacles of thought which were led by this piece life...About the fading life-line....Caught in the cycle of rebirth.....love those two line primarily as they evoke much thought and visuals...tyvm...karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (10/17/2012 12:24:00 AM)

    Well penning here..so great and honest. i agree with your fragrant words (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,664 Points Ramesh Rai (9/12/2012 4:19:00 AM)

    We all are moving within a natural cycle. As per Indian philosophy it is true.After this life we must have to be prepared for our next birth. i have posted a similar poem in hindi. a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 586 Points Unwritten Soul (9/11/2012 1:18:00 AM)

    The technique and idea of your story here is very unique, i like them as it really deserve not less than 10_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 586 Points The Reader (9/10/2012 5:28:00 PM)

    This poem is a wonderful poetic preface as a conscious & careful reader can easily find out that the titles of
    different poems are so finely interwoven building up of their own subtle imagery here that they do not merely make a list but paint a picture...right? :) (Report) Reply

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