Unwritten Soul


Bouquet Of Words - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Don't ask me what is friend?
What is love? Where it lies in?
Well definition, most of us confused
With the sweet of love juice
As love has chain to fuse
Grab this love that i lend
Love is not only for a lover
Love also made for a friend
and great love for God
Beautiful loves are broad

Dear, love of friend...
like the blessing rain
to fall on dry and hot desert
then raise a nice feeling
grow green, life in desert
sweet, beautiful and blessed...

A True friend, a true hand to lend
Sweet and thick like honey
Nothing with money
Hate to hate
Love to love
Not love to hate
Or hate to love

Losing a friend
Losing an element of light
Losing a different sight
Still can see with normal light
But missing core of value inside

A True friend
Share one color in life canvas
Surround by true friends
Finished a priceless of life canvas
With multiple colors trend

Simply, deeply thanks to say
You are my good friend ever
Makes everyday is a beautiful day
We stay in field of innocent forever

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Re.edited and a 2nd version of love and friend,
Dedicated 'To all my friends here'
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Comments about Bouquet Of Words by Unwritten Soul

  • Muhammad Ali (8/20/2016 2:34:00 PM)


    you are right, and we can't tell everything in the definition of love. to be a part of love, it is beautiful. very nice poem (Report) Reply

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  • Christopher Tye Christopher Tye (7/26/2016 9:48:00 AM)


    A really wonderful poem, without friendship the world is a desolate place. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (5/13/2016 10:01:00 AM)


    Love also made for a friend! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Mostazir Ruby Mostazir (6/24/2015 10:21:00 AM)


    Losing a friend
    Losing an element of light....true.wonderful poem! I enjoyed it :) (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (8/16/2014 12:09:00 AM)


    A nice elaboration of widened love and friendship which I cherished from your penning (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (5/4/2014 12:32:00 AM)


    As long as day will follow night
    blessings shine with moring light
    and those blessing shall not end
    as long as words can find a friend. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/17/2014 8:33:00 PM)


    impregnated with the ink of friendship. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Mohabeer Beeharry Mohabeer Beeharry (8/21/2013 6:25:00 AM)


    I am still looking for that ideal friend.
    One I could trust.
    This I find only in God. I have done my time of trusting
    But this definitely a lovely poem.like it

    Mohabeer Beeharry

    Read my poems sometimes and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (8/16/2013 2:33:00 PM)


    loosing a friend is like missing a core of value inside. Beautiful write..Loved reading each lines...Each lines describe the value of friendship...Yes, a true friendship is based on innocence....so well said..
    Beautiful poem..Inspiring one...

    Thank you for all the valuable and inspiring comments for my poems... Thanks a lot.... (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 12:33:00 AM)


    Losing a friend
    Losing an element of light
    Losing a different sight
    Still can see with normal light
    But missing core of value inside (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 12:32:00 AM)


    Dear, love of friend...
    like the blessing rain
    to fall on dry and hot desert
    then raise a nice feeling
    grow green, life in desert
    sweet, beautiful and blessed... (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (7/5/2013 7:13:00 PM)


    very swt.i liked it.
    Simply, deeply thanks to say
    You are my good friend ever
    Makes everyday is a beautiful day
    We stay in field of innocent forever (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (6/19/2013 7:18:00 PM)


    universal friendship is a wonderful feeling. lovely (Report) Reply

  • Ambrosia A (6/18/2013 11:44:00 PM)


    What a poetic tribute to friendship. Loved reading it. Wish to be your friend forever. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan Yasmeen Khan (6/2/2013 9:56:00 AM)


    You believe in universal friendship, yes all human are like friends if only we'd understand it. (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas Farah Ilyas (4/29/2013 2:05:00 PM)


    am i your friend?
    what a dedication to your beloved friends!
    memories of love ones friends always enlighten our heart....agree with you..
    lovely (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Davis (4/6/2013 3:01:00 PM)


    Studded with verbal gems!
    Work to be proud of, Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (2/15/2013 11:54:00 PM)


    A classic dedication to all in your friends in your inimitable style in this BOUQUET OF WORDS is matchless! ! (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan Poetheart Morgan (2/2/2013 9:19:00 AM)


    You are right Soul. I think only 3 things remain in our lives: work, sons and friendship. The rest passes and only leaves us memories sweet or bitter. If love exists, you must first succumb friendship.She is the foundation for the bad times and that makes us stay and not leave. A beautiful bouquet for you!
    Now i'll try more ten times to submit my comments. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (1/9/2013 9:02:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem Soul, you deserve to have many true friends. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 17, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 8, 2012


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