What can I say
to erase the wilt
I cause within
your heart
that beats
for mine
and only wants
to be freed
not entangled
in this snarly vine
What can I say
to take it all away?
Except, I love you
I showed this to my wife, it related to a conversation we just had. My wife says hi!
Three words 'I love you' said with real meaning says it all - well done Don S
This poem wrapped itself around my heart like honeysuckle vines. So lovely and so true. Raynette
that beats for mine and only wants to be freed....entangled.. except i love you...... fine expressions..... a fine love poem. tony
I think you just said it. Your pieces are entrancing.
Those three words, Are so hard for me to say… Maybe, just maybe, I’ll get to use them some day… => Ali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very nice poem Adrienne.Welldone.