A Poem To Jack Poem by Laura Cummings

A Poem To Jack

Rating: 4.8


I was snooping around my mates lap,
And his name was Jack,
What was found there,
Can only be described,
As two big biscuits and a shortcake.
The smell to each was distinct to its own,
And can never be replicated.
O Jack why did you leave me,
I thought forever we would be,
I only wanted a biscuit after dribbling on your knee.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina PrettyBrownEyes 13 March 2005

kind of funny..but why was this person in their lap and why was there bread in the lap! ? this is confusing. your friends sound very strange..but who am i to talk anyway regarding strange friends..^_^ keep up the good work.

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Ian Curtis 29 July 2006

BRILLIANT AND VERY FUNNY

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Michael Shepherd 08 November 2005

They say love is a warm puppy...

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Gaia Moore 20 September 2005

I'm gonna asume this person is a friend of yours? lol did they apriciate this poem?

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Hayley Griffiths 26 March 2005

well done very good and funny: -)

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Samantha Griffiths 18 March 2005

Very creative! ! ! Good use of metaphors with this (i hope they're metaphors! ! !) Very funny!

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Laura Cummings

Laura Cummings

Alexander Hospital, Redditch.
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