(July 15,1999 / Barinas)

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A Poet's Soul

Vividly living in a shine, pure-hearted blinding light,
Luxurious ink traced in line, devastating moaning mountain height.
Slender enormity showing no decline, heavy dead wings raising flight,
Bittersweet blessed morning wine, blue of the sky, angel´s white.

Happiness living inside our words, white clouds adorning the sky,
Sparkling glow of guitar cords, lofty Heaven shouting a reply.
There's a moon that glows our soul, and a sun that burns our heart,
North and South shifting poles, singing larks repairing parts.

Sheer poems brightening stars, melting icebergs in our hearts,
Terminating coldness and it starts, with a simple paper from the mart.
It's the impulse to our goals, our essence in burning coal,
Always there to shine and show, a poet's soul.

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Are you happy?
Keep your luck.
Are you lost?
Keep looking up.

Submitted: Saturday, February 16, 2013
Edited: Saturday, February 16, 2013


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  • Elena Sandu (3/2/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful wisdom touched my soul. Thank you!

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (2/27/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    BRILLIANT RENDITION! Looking up to more of your poems!

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  • Aswath Raman (2/19/2013 5:50:00 PM)

    Such an amazing Imagination. I wish the poem continued! Nice piece Lu :)

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  • Akash Sawle (2/18/2013 4:30:00 AM)

    Great write..
    Keep the good work up..

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  • Payal Parande (2/17/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    it is simply splendid, very good

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  • Titi Dale (2/17/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    This is AMAZING. no other words for it! ! ! Just plain... AWESOME.

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  • ~~ Lyda ~~ (2/16/2013 9:11:00 AM)

    My paper heart loves this part. :)
    10+ for it. So proud of u.

    Sheer poems brightening stars, melting icebergs in our hearts,
    Terminating coldness and it starts, with a simple paper from the mart.
    It's the impulse to our goals, our essence in burning coal,
    Alwasy there to shine and show, a poet's soul.

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    0 person did not like.
  • Rikki Lawson (2/16/2013 1:37:00 AM)

    Very passionate depiction, I would agree.

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