spiritual seeker

Rookie - 194 Points (22-11-55 / Malaysia)

A Promise Fullfilled - Poem by spiritual seeker

Birds in hurried flight,
Across the red evening glow,
A promise fullfilled.


Comments about A Promise Fullfilled by spiritual seeker

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/4/2014 12:25:00 AM)

    .enjoyed this short write.lovely (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (6/5/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    probably heading south for the winter. nice write. I enjoy short poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (5/14/2013 11:51:00 PM)

    Birds always do return home everyday, happy and contended. So I wish to be a bird in my next life, to enjoy life. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points Hans Vr (8/11/2011 4:39:00 AM)

    A very good haiku, my friend. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 3, 2012


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