A Ray, The Rays Poem by sarwar chowdhury

A Ray, The Rays

Rating: 5.0


Rays of false hope
captures people's attention
Some are able to cope
with, some are in tension!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 09 July 2008

Rays of false hope - well said, well penned in few words.

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Cindy Anna Bailey 12 July 2008

In such simple formation conveys a deeper message! I like it

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Blue Eyes 17 July 2008

although it is very short it is full of wisdom, i loved it

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Anjali Sinha 21 August 2008

yes u put me in tension and I dont know how to cope ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 love anjali

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Subham Dutta 22 August 2008

Hi Sarwar Chowdhury, Khub bhalo kabita. Try to write more.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 March 2010

Sure and certain….and blatant… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 15 September 2009

So often found. Prudent persons even become prey. Nice Ten [ goofed vote box why? ] dr. sakti

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 June 2009

very meaningful...full of truth food for the mind...appealing 10++++ ...looking forward to your new poems again, my friend more power...more writes from you.. lovelots, maia

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Mamta Agarwal 24 December 2008

well said Sarwar, meaningful. its best to face the truth and move on... Happy NEW YEAR Mamta

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 13 October 2008

You have proved yourself with these meaningful lines....You are indeed an exceptional poet....

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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