A Real Man Poem by layshaun sho

A Real Man

Rating: 2.5


Here's sumthing for ur eyes to feast on.
U R a mountain a solid rock foundation.
u wont collapse for no one. U R strength u can carry the weight of the world and say hear I am give me more.
U R a gem rough around the edges and beautiful in the center.
your heart is exuberant and full of love and life.
its too bad so many cant pierce into ur very bein and soul to discover that. U R a morning glory closes in the dark and wen the daylight appears r so radiant and beautiful.
U R emotion dont be afraid to let go, U R human touch ur skin and ur feel the warmth.
U R A REAL MAN! ! ! ! ! I hope this warm ur heart wit wat ur going thru friend. TRIBUTE TO STEVE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 09 February 2009

A very interesting take on A REAL MAN. I thought it was well written. Clear and meaningful. I thought the structure perhaps should be altered, but the poem will survive. GW62

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Thomas Coltrin 06 February 2009

i liked it thx.....haha jk

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