! ! ! A Refreshing Shower Poem by Bob Blackwell

! ! ! A Refreshing Shower

Rating: 2.9


After rain falls, the Earth sighs,
stretches, cups both hands,
accepts, thoughts of change.

Knowledge showered gives a
start to Earths refreshment,
shows way to path of truth.

Warm sun helps feed the growth,
nourishes new thoughts for life,
helps to build new attitudes.

Scene changes, new point of view,
life changes, no stormy clouds
to spoil, no guilty feelings.

Earth bathes in truth’s elixir,
soaks in new outlook, and
becomes happy with his world.


01-12-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 04 December 2009

words expressed are poetic!

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Heyyou Boy 19 January 2012

This write opened my eyes just a little more. Thanks Bob

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Kesav Easwaran 12 February 2010

this poetic shower provides a refreshing outlook on life...well meaning words beautifully presented...10

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Ritty Patnaik 20 December 2009

dear bob.....a very invigourating poem! we draw all our energy from the five elements.we are made out of them, and go back to them.the poem refreshes all creations looking up for the rain..as usual a lovely poem.best wishes. ritty

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C. P. Sharma 13 December 2009

Sounding a bugle of Change. Superbly penned. Refreshing shower on the parched land Once again the earth in new apparel stands. CP

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Sandra Fowler 05 December 2009

Great use of metaphor.The first stanza is especially evocative.10, for you. Warm wishes, Sandra

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