Temitayo Ankra

Rookie - 7 Points (nigeria)

A Sad Love Note


I write to you a sad love note because:
My heart beats just at the thought of u
My heart skips cause of what i feel for u
I wish you would understand my plight
My heart begs for your subtle light
Not a day goes by without the thought of you in my head
I try to fathom the reasons i feel this way
But Its unexplainable just like how night becomes day
Even i marvel at the feelings inside me
I have gone to battle with my heart
I have tried to subdue my heart
But the more i try the more i become restless and helpless
I understand your stance on what i ask
But helpless heart begs to be loved
Rejection would cause me more pain
The feeling would make me mundane
Give me a reason to write you a love note the way it is supposed to
Give my heart a reason to make happiness its antidote
With your name tattooed on my wrist
I did not plan it this way
I have always been the one to be chased
But now the tables have turned
I really wish you would understand and
give a helpless heart that chance
That's why i write this sad love note to you

Submitted: Friday, September 16, 2011
Edited: Friday, September 16, 2011

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Lozaan Khumbah (9/16/2011 2:59:00 AM)

    Nice way to express... I like this poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Jinal Oswal (9/16/2011 2:40:00 AM)

    It's awesome! ! A sad heart can do wonders on paper. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Olumide Familusi (9/16/2011 2:19:00 AM)

    Hey you! ...where have you been..Its been ages...Nice poem..sometimes, its good to have the tables around so you can have a feeling both ways :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (9/16/2011 1:57:00 AM)

    Sometimes love notes are some of the best poems because they are more personal then most of the others.

    Great Poem, Thanks For The Courage To Share.. (Report) Reply

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