Those dark big lotus-like eyes,
Makes me feel that I am stepping into
The waters of an unknown depth;
Not knowing wether I will float or drown!
But all the same, those gazzle-like eyes,
Tempts me to take a chance, and plunge,
Inside those measureless depths,
Irrespective of all consequence!
For it is a risk I am ready to take, -
Far better than this mundane, monotone
life instead!
(New Delhi/17 Oct 07)
really romantic- strong temptation to break the monotony, imagine the risk and regret. i really like it, first of your romantic poems i have read. it belongs to the realm of fantasy, we all have from time to time. Mamta
poet seems mesmerized by eyes...and readers too are helplessly taking a plunge.. shamiyana...of eyelashes... :))
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Temptations worth to try at Romance a myth to trance at All is well that end well Keep the level at breathing point Else you wil never catch with the day light. Dear Poet, We all humans have clicked at this point We all have our soar to that enticement Worth crossing hundred miles Myth or Truth, Lets hold on to the Pitch. This write is melody, I enjoyed.