A Small Line Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A Small Line

Rating: 5.0


Smiled in my heart
Looking at a line
It looks very small
Many eyes ignore it
It’s a small line

Its length is small
Its width is small
So it looks small
It’s a small line
Its depth is secret

It fills the eyes
It makes us cry
But eyes ignore it
It’s a small line
It has a name

It is your name
It is my name
But we can’t see it
It’s a small line
It is on tombstone

Between those two dates
Which many eyes read
Ignoring a small line
It’s a small line of life
Line of life is very short

So don’t waste it
In hating and hurting
So make it count
With smile and warmth
Leave your mark forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 17 February 2009

a lovely small line..the finishing was excellent

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Leave you're line forever nice nice work Krista

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rago rago 15 May 2009

an eloquent and beautiful lines.........see my 10 ++

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 May 2009

yeah a nice one indeed....thanks for your poems...enjoyed them very much..I ll visit you soon..regards shan from srilanka

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A good poem of positivism and entertained as such.

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Walterrean Salley 17 December 2009

Yes. Life is so fragile, and we must make every second count. A beautiful poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2009

So don’t waste it In hating and hurting So make it count With smile and warmth Leave your mark forever.beautiful lines and leave deep impact on mind... lovely to read...............10 read mine beautifulworld..... beauty...anywhere......colour

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Indira Renganathan 16 August 2009

Teaching the truth...the last two stanzas do it very well....thank you

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Saadat Tahir 21 June 2009

very very strong novel and different way of saying a great truism very well done cheers

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