iron panda 23

Rookie (23rd of january / a land of unknown)

A Smile Like The Sun - Poem by iron panda 23

April showers bring May flowers
A sunny day will make your sadness go away
A smile from you will make the pretty flowers bloom
And when they bloom I will give them to you, as a special gift
Why? Because your smile will last a lifetime
And the flowers will come and go
If they are with you I'll know that they will always be happy
And that they are sure to grow
So keep smiling and show your happiness and you will see
That the more these flowers grow, the happier you'll be

~IP23


Comments about A Smile Like The Sun by iron panda 23

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (5/26/2010 11:38:00 AM)

    Loved the freedom of this poem. Expressive of creation. Big smile on my face. Well done (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Nemo ..couzack (5/8/2010 7:25:00 AM)

    A sunny day will make your sadness go away
    A smile from you will make the pretty flowers bloom... i like this part..
    and all of your poems is really amazing.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/7/2010 2:32:00 AM)

    Look Poetry is smiling at you and readers.
    Smiling at you always I’m
    10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raahu Selaama (5/3/2010 12:33:00 PM)

    April showers will bring May its flowers, but a fake smile goes no distance than nose in length. Good poem ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Larxene (you can call me Larxy) Addesso (4/22/2010 5:01:00 PM)

    This is like soooooo sweet! ! ! i love it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C Note (3/24/2010 12:24:00 PM)

    I love the title. Have you thought of expanding upon the concept? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarah Marie (2/27/2010 12:17:00 PM)

    I love this poem it is very beautiful and expressive. I can see all thimagery here. Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Shepard (1/6/2010 9:27:00 PM)

    What a lovely cheerful poem! I love the sun and smiling...these two things do wonders to boost one's mood. Let us look forward to spring, flowers, and sunshine, and especially hope for joy in life. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 4, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 16, 2010


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