A Smile Like The Sun Poem by iron panda 23

A Smile Like The Sun

Rating: 4.7


April showers bring May flowers
A sunny day will make your sadness go away
A smile from you will make the pretty flowers bloom
And when they bloom I will give them to you, as a special gift
Why? Because your smile will last a lifetime
And the flowers will come and go
If they are with you I'll know that they will always be happy
And that they are sure to grow
So keep smiling and show your happiness and you will see
That the more these flowers grow, the happier you'll be

~IP23

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krista Shepard 06 January 2010

What a lovely cheerful poem! I love the sun and smiling...these two things do wonders to boost one's mood. Let us look forward to spring, flowers, and sunshine, and especially hope for joy in life.

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Sarah Marie 27 February 2010

I love this poem it is very beautiful and expressive. I can see all thimagery here. Very nice.

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C Note 24 March 2010

I love the title. Have you thought of expanding upon the concept?

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Loved the freedom of this poem. Expressive of creation. Big smile on my face. Well done

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Nemo ..couzack 08 May 2010

A sunny day will make your sadness go away A smile from you will make the pretty flowers bloom... i like this part.. and all of your poems is really amazing.. :)

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Look Poetry is smiling at you and readers. Smiling at you always I’m 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Raahu Selaama 03 May 2010

April showers will bring May its flowers, but a fake smile goes no distance than nose in length. Good poem ;)

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This is like soooooo sweet! ! ! i love it!

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