A Possible.....Goodbye? ? Poem by iron panda 23

A Possible.....Goodbye? ?



If i were to leave and
never come back....
would anyone notice im gone? ?
my presence is fading
if i go you'll be celebrating...
that is...if you remember...but im wrong

If i were to leave and
never return....
would anyone notice
im missing? ?
all the heartwarming things
that were said to me...im guessing
they're all dead...or maybe...
it was said....but didnt mean anything

A possible 'goodbye'
is what ill say...is that a crime? ?
because 'goodbyes are forever...
hellos are for now'
since im not greeting you (all)
im leaving you (all) ....
as in my life....shall forever....be paused....

~IP23

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 26 June 2010

A possible 'goodbye' is what ill say...is that a crime? ? because goodbyes are forever... hellos are for now since im not greeting you (all) im leaving you (all) .... as in my life....shall forever....be paused.... very poetic anger with sweet composition of words..i liked the way you expressed this poem..well done..10/10

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