A star
Shining brightly by the moonlight
Like a flickering spotlight
Like the only one of it's kind
On Earth I feel like a giant
Compared to a star
A star
! A STAR!
Dear Emily You are a beautiful and gifted daughter, I will always love you and your amazing insight and talents, and the kindness that you show to others is so important Love Daddy! ! ! XXXXXXX
Stellar. Your Daddy is right; and you have inherited his talent and made it all your own. xxxx
You are stellar. So is your Daddy. Both of you much beloved here! t x
I think it is you that is in the spotlight now Emily. A sweet poem and I agree one does feel like a giant when one looks up and see just a little tiny star winking at you. A lovely poem. You should be very proud of yourself. Lots of applause. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Emily...this is a lovely poem...you are a star! ! Terrific poem for someone so young! Dee
And a star you will continue to be if you do this well on your writing.. Well done, Young Lady Emily, well done.
A lovely look at something we all see.....no matter where we are in the world. The stars are often a point of fascination for me. Another great poem Emily! For 9 years old, you have an enormous amount of talent.....proving once again that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree heh Duncan? I will surely watch for more from this budding poet! Sincerely, Mary
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Stars attract giants eye much better Emily, they are that much closer and get caught in the Star shine. Excellent little Star shaped poem. Smiling at you, Tai