A Strange Love ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Strange Love ~

Rating: 4.7


This night bears testimony,
And waves know anguish, suffering and agitation,
like a child he took a red-petalled rose
and started removing petals one by one,
counting- she loves me, she loves me not.

Unaware of the rose's plight, he removed all of its petals.
Now he wonders who suffered more, him or the rose.
The final petal, of course, said 'she loves me not.'

When the wind began to blow the clouds,
And the stars appeared bright and clear
reasoned that the stars would reveal the truth.
So he started counting right away: -
she loves me, she loves me not.

As the sun started to break through the night
and the stars started to disappear.
he ended the count on 'she loves me not'.
Now everyday he waits impatiently for night to arrive
and he resumes his count from where he left off.

A Strange Love ~
Saturday, May 6, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love,blind love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Courtesy for photo by: Mindaugas Vitkus on Unsplash
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 May 2023

I love this poem Asim

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M. Asim Nehal 08 May 2023

Thank u so much LeeAnn.

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Pallavi Tripathi 07 May 2023

She loves me not and the requiem for unrequited love.

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M. Asim Nehal 08 May 2023

Thanks much Pallavi.

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Anjandev Roy 07 May 2023

This is simply amazing.....my dear friend......

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M. Asim Nehal 08 May 2023

Thanks much ADR

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Juhaina Tumlu 06 May 2023

I appreciate writers creative thinking, I am sure no such lover exists on earth anymore. Correct me if I am wrong.

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M. Asim Nehal 08 May 2023

You are right Juhaina. Thanks.

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Gordon Walter 06 May 2023

True love 💘 is painful for the onlookers but the one who goes through that situation enjoys.

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M. Asim Nehal 08 May 2023

Thanks Gordon.

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