A Struggle - Ghazal In English Poem by M. Asim Nehal

What a lovely poem with rare and precious insights into the realities of life. Each couplet is so revealing. Thanks, Asim ji, for sharing this outstanding poetic marvel.

If the convoy is lost during the expedition, due to shifting sands, the footprints are lost. Similarly People in trouble do not get the support from anyone except their own shadow.// praiseworthy expression; human is fond to imitate but sometime difficulties come in the every way of life where every sign of imitation won't be everlasting and there the life faces the struggle.

Loveliest Ghazal translated, all things in the poem sounds logic and TRUE, and I have enjoyed immensely, but do birds struggle to find their way back to their nest when the clouds are dark and thick? I am thinking and doubting....once I had been a bird, must you know Conclusion constantly a beautiful and brilliant poem from your golden pen, dear Ghazal Poet. FIVE Stars! Best wushes from The Netherlands

Its very good and poignant philosophy. Like it.

Commendable poem, attracts 5 star rating

A struggle in life's journey nicely described, each couplets are gem 5*

We all struggle in our life it is not easy going for anyone there are hurdle there are testing Times and your poem is nothing but what we face in life has been described nicely5*

How can someone not like these couplets. Everyone is fantastic.

Supreme lines birds struggle to find the way back to their nest. If the convoy is lost during the expedition, due to shifting sands, the footprints are lost. Similarly People in trouble do not get the support from anyone except their own shadow.

Very profound poem It is possible that the downer will get the straw to hold on, Yet the swimmer often struggles to reach the depths of the sea.