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A summer love

A warm summer's night
nestled cozy in your arms
rocking back and forth
from a wooden swing
hung by an oak tree
we sit
nothing but silence
just lingering thoughts
rafting in the summer's breeze
floating toward stars bright
the feel of your touch
warm breath against my neck
makes my heart beat rapidly
as i lay my head upon your shoulder
and your arm wrapped around me
sweet tender lips full of smiles
speaks of our love so pure and true
when you lay them upon mine
no words are needed
for our love is already known
the look in your eyes
tells all
on this warm summer's night
a summer love is all that remains.

Submitted: Thursday, June 28, 2012
Edited: Thursday, June 28, 2012


Comments about this poem (A summer love by Darkangel Flyfree )

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  • Hamid Negah (7/27/2012 11:58:00 AM)

    very nice, when i read your poem feel you're present.

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  • Guess Who (7/4/2012 1:39:00 AM)

    A great poem well written and well chosen words Summer Love ! ! nice title i love your poem Good work keep it up
    Guess Who

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  • Dougie Fresh (6/28/2012 11:39:00 AM)

    very descriptive and as usual a very pretty poem. Nice Job!

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  • Shouvik Roy (6/28/2012 10:38:00 AM)

    aaahh..i could just feel those moments...sensual write...nicely described... :) good job

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