What you want
Me to talk
Talk of your beauty
The gorgeousness of your body
The curves tender
The neck like swan
Fairness of skin
Sleepy eyes
Your red lips
The fall of your hairs
Touching the line
And
Thin legs
And the beauty of your hands
A piece of art
With henna
Or a modern tattoo
Immensity of love
A moment memorable
An evening
Sunset redness
I have won you
By my talk
And
My love for you
The moment is gone
Now I am alone
Your memories
Even that moment
No longer here
So are your memories
Why so many fantasies
I live in real world
So what is the meaning of love
An addition
A journey forward
Towards total freedom
Talking is often where the trouble starts! Wise musings here, though we all love being wooed by great talkers.... HG: -) xx
You're a special poet to reveal the truth....and I agree with Indira Babbellapati..10
if you love someone, set her or him free...if s/he urs, sure to come back into ur embrace...yes, sadiq...love means freedom n space, respect n regard...
A thoughtful meaning behind a nice flow of words and a constant deep thought expressed in two last lines, creating an interesting effect. Very well written, and very deep, as usual.10
i agree with helen... the pleasure that both sides get... but it's fleeting... seeing the falseness of it is freedom... great write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Practicality to reality...driving on to our choice, to live in the flow...a freedom to the past and unborn future....a 10 love it Cate