A True Broken Heart Poem by Olivia .o

A True Broken Heart

Rating: 4.3


She watched
And she cried
As she sat there
And watched true horror
Unfold upon her eyes
And they all watched
As she broke
She left
With nothing
Except for A broken heart
Nothing left
All alone
She sat in the dark
Blown to pieces
All scattered in the wind
She would never truly love again
Because of him

Sunday, February 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,sad,sad love,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am not saying that all people are strait because that is a lie. It's just how it ended up going. Just making sure that no one gets offended ♡ And thank you to anybody who reads my poems! ♡♡
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2016

Blown to pieces All scattered in the wind She would never truly love again Because of him.. terrible experience dear poet........ you have power in your words. you have depth in your emotions..... a very nice poem . thank you. tony

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Atasha Williams 21 March 2016

Very emotive and sad.. Keep up the gr8 work :)

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Prof Manu Mangattu 21 February 2016

Nice poem. The heplessness of a forlorn beloved is beautifully captured in these melancholy lines. Reminiscent of the poem Poor Girl by the great Maya Angelou. Thanks for sharing

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