Dog goD 8Hate

Rookie - 477 Points (Grass Valley, Ca.)

A Voluptuous Dance In Acerbic Display - Poem by Dog goD 8Hate

The voluptuous dance of a lady
can be seen at this site –
various steps:
jigs, twists, plentiful pirouettes
and a curious view of rear-end-swing.

All free to they who seek
this melody(dissonance over consonance)
with a view in bouncy abundancy, albeit,
exponentially acerbic display.

There is a message here, yet few
see the suggestion, or know
inherence for cause:
self-actualization
of monkeys’ mothers’ matriarchs

who eat fruit with their tail,
swing through trees with their tongue,
and know themselves as a rail...
from 'San Diego” to...
Timbuktu.

Alas,
they’ve mastered their business
and know the way...
through jungles of Malls
Sprawls & Monkie-e-es -
it's brilliance in
misconception.

(Dec.01,07)

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Comments about A Voluptuous Dance In Acerbic Display by Dog goD 8Hate

  • Rookie okeydokey #3 (1/23/2008 12:52:00 AM)

    are you really 8 years old...this is really good...hehehe... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 9, 2013


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