A Walk In Mansarovar Park Poem by Mamta Agarwal

A Walk In Mansarovar Park

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The sun was ready to set,
The sky had turned amber.
I felt compelled to get
Out, as I suddenly remembered,
How the view made me feel.
I could miss a meal,
Not this gorgeous sight.
It just seems right.

The birds are homeward bound.
They are so high in the sky I can’t hear a sound,
I feel in harmony
It’s kind of funny,
Here in the Mansarovar Park,
Where I come for a walk
I feel one with my creator,
And all the mental layers
Of fear, anxiety just disappear.

It uplifts my spirit and mood
As nothing else could.
I feel a sense of being
And find no reason to sing
In praise of Lord at a temple,
While there is ample
Proof of his Presence in everything
I can feel his blessings

I am because he is
This realization fills me with bliss.
I bow my head in acceptance
And have no words to express his benevolence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K. V. Venkataramana 07 March 2008

Your poem unfolds your mystic experience. Superb poem! K.V.Venkataramana

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Raj Nandy 10 August 2008

It is a walk I love to take, any day any time! -Raj Nandy

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Rema Prasanna 18 July 2008

It is a pleasant, calm walk or I can say journey of life in a way to conciliate mind and soul, refreshing lines and I feel it in my heart10+ Rema

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Rani Turton 18 May 2008

A moment of harmony with the universe that is almost mystical. Well expressed, Mamta.

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Vidi Writes 16 May 2008

Those who - Can search Can watch Can dream Can feel... Find happiness all around. Appreciation with full senses A great reverence to his benevolence. Simple way of expression. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

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Poras Sharma 19 March 2008

Wondeful poem, hope to write like you some day!

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