Vaibhav Pandey

Rookie - 2 Points (23 march,1987 / new delhi)

A Watery Wisdom - Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Flows from the dead
to read new trace,
losing numerous shapes
yet its identity forever stays.....

Comments about A Watery Wisdom by Vaibhav Pandey

  • Rookie Gold Fish (10/16/2009 6:12:00 AM)

    Nice poem. From the soil, we have originated and to thus we will ultimately return. For nature is composed of the same core elements fundamental to all organisms. 'A watery wisdom' that seeps down into the Earth to be recycled. Fundamental priniciples. Lovely read.10+ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mark Nwagwu (8/5/2009 4:01:00 PM)

    deep, to read new trace. fluid woderful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ritty Patnaik (7/28/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    dear vaibhav,
    who inspires you to write such wonderful lines? i am amazed you write so well, with the wisdom of a seer.god bless you always.
    ritty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nikunj Sharma (7/16/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    This has depth and a meaning which a few shall understand.may take a lifetime...keep em coming (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (6/17/2009 3:31:00 AM)

    Changing shapes numerous and yet remaining basically unchanged's wisdom watery.
    Smart write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (6/14/2009 5:33:00 AM)

    Vaibhav you could tell a lot in few words. But consider changing 'losing numerous shapes' to taking numerous shapes'. Just a freindly suggestion. But this is a very good theme u have dealt with so well. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,778 Points C. P. Sharma (6/13/2009 9:01:00 AM)

    True, wisdom has no relation with life. The life is ever new and fresh to enjoy.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (6/7/2009 11:20:00 PM)

    simple nice.. you you. i started writing a poem called wisdom.. today.. interesting eh.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Anjali Sinha (6/7/2009 10:27:00 PM)

    its deep
    that watery wisdom
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,530 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (6/5/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    nicely constructed a truth. shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarvesh Kulkarni (6/4/2009 3:27:00 PM)

    deep....and beautiful.
    loved it.
    loses its shape...yes, but regains its form.
    thank you dost. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (6/3/2009 10:43:00 PM)

    A wisdomful write......Keep writing and thanks for sharing this one.
    Best Wishes
    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (6/3/2009 2:13:00 PM)

    this is a nice thought provoking one indeed....thanks for the words of wisdom..nice write...

    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (6/3/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    watery or not...wisdom must stay...must prevail...good thought out write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (6/3/2009 9:42:00 AM)

    Deep and profound...........a well crafted small poem with enough essence (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (6/3/2009 7:23:00 AM)

    profound thought in those four lines....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Sandra Martyres (6/3/2009 3:35:00 AM)

    Well said Vaibhav....great piece 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/3/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    profound thoughts....lovely poem..........10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011

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