Treasure Island

Naseer Ahmed Nasir

(April 01,1954 / Pakistan)

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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (4/15/2010 10:00:00 AM)

    The Spirit (for Naseer A. Nasir)

    Flicker down the mournful halls
    Of glaring ice,
    Flash onto Sirius or Aldebaran,
    Whatever;
    Unlatch pulsating gaols,
    Surround us with solace
    To keep the Child in hearts
    So close to Creator's endeavour;

    In glare of eternity,
    As the beauty is settled
    You drift along a place
    Where eagles fly,
    Defining essentials
    To succeed in a taken battle
    Soaring amid
    The yielding bells of human sky;

    Born in the wonderland,
    A spirit erasing shades
    Painting serenity, peace,
    All Universe in motion,
    Any radiance or dimness
    That nature emanates,
    Holding to balance
    And divine proportion;

    Uncovering wisdom
    Of the higher world's gates,
    You climb to mountains' peaks
    To sanctify sensations -
    This gift - it arises
    Out of Clear and takes
    To the ninth heaven
    Of our souls' purification.

    Yelena M (Russian Federation)

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (4/15/2010 9:48:00 AM)

    You Are Above All This, Naseer

    You are the Sun
    Which can not be hidden
    By transient clouds
    Which do not last for long
    Purified by the flame of your poetry!

    You are the Moon
    Which fearless fights
    The darkest night
    Whether we look on or not
    You, outshine all the stars!

    You are the Butterfly
    Spreading joy to all
    Forgetting caterpillar
    And cocoon days
    Choosing not to be shackled by pettiness!

    Fly my Koel, my Cuckoo
    As you spread wings and rise
    Above into the azure skies
    The muddy mire of earth
    Can never dream to touch you!

    Angelina Pandian (India)

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (4/15/2010 9:40:00 AM)

    Naseer, Don't Ever Say Good Bye!

    How do you sing your songs
    Just so sweetly - Like
    Golden Honey peach
    Soft and luscious
    Dripping with wisdom
    Each line each word
    Plucked with such care
    And arranged so wonderfully.
    I hear your song wafted
    Gently with the breeze
    It flies across to reach
    A million souls which wait
    To quench their thirst
    At the cool deep spring
    The oasis we call Naseer's Poems.
    Your flow of thoughts, dear friend
    Matches the flow of colours & hues
    Woven with skill and so resplendent
    The play of words it plays tag
    With the shadows and the wind
    Your poems float like a song
    From a flute no words only soul
    It soothes, surrounds, fills
    And sinks into my soul
    Like dew drops of the early morning
    Like rain drops on parched desert land
    I do not read but only read
    And let out a soft sigh!
    Now, I hear you say, Good bye
    Dear friend, I can not bear
    To hear such words so painful
    Like hot lead poured into my ear
    There are tears in my eye
    And I cry!
    Do not say good bye, Naseer
    Not yet, not so soon, never
    Please do not say good bye
    Do you plan to migrate
    Like a Sarus crane to other lands
    Do tell me I shall spread my wings
    To join you on your journey too
    Be the leading one flying into the sun
    We shall follow in formation behind
    You leave me dumbfounded
    Bewildered, aghast I find myself
    Suddenly all so alone in a fog
    Why? Why do you say good bye?
    My heart keeps asking, why?

    Angelina Pandian (India)

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/22/2010 12:22:00 AM)

    From: Eliza Keating (glasgow United Kingdom; Female; 43)
    To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir
    Date Time: 3/21/2010 1: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: from eliza

    hi, what a great piece of writing, you use such expressive and rich text.which has clearly not been lost in translation well done, eliza..folk of feodora's lane.

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/16/2010 9:51:00 AM)

    From: Jerry Buckley (Brentwood, TN United States; Male; 53)
    To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir
    Date Time: 3/16/2010 9: 30: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: windows

    sweet.....even though we are from different cultures and backgrounds, you and I are using many of the same concepts and even expressions in our poetry....excellent job of transcending the differences and appealing to the universal

    Jerry Buckley / Voice of One

  • Cheryl Griffith (3/14/2010 5:15:00 PM)

    I read 'A dream fallen out of sleep' and I thought it was very interestiong even the name. Reminds me of the link between dreams and relality and sometimes its not really a dream but a reality. Anyway I liked it. Also the repetition made it interesting.

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/2/2010 12:01:00 AM)

    From: Apoet Bangla (India ;)
    To: Naseer Ahmed Nasir
    Date Time: 3/1/2010 6: 34: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: your creation

    Poet,
    thankful to make me touch with your writings.
    perhaps you are a poet by your birth I think.
    so easy is your utterance and so smooth, really ovrwhelming.
    I think your Identity should be univrsal.
    Dr. Anand has done the perfect choice of work which one life can not always get the opportunity.

    Stay on your feet long long-

    pranab

  • Vanessa Cabrera (3/1/2010 2:58:00 AM)

    Window is very nice one, it only says that you have so many experienced in life, you saw so many things, and i love it so much.I'd learned a lot. Thank you.

  • Leila Taghavi (2/27/2010 5:49:00 AM)

    Thanks for deep translation on Windows

  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (1/30/2010 10:17:00 AM)

    Naseer Ahmed Nasir is one of the finest poets from the sub-continent with true command over diction, rhyme scheme and poetic devices.His invitation to read one of his poems' WINDOWS' came to me as a sudden surprise.I wish him all the best in his poetic exercises ahead too.
    ' The website is lovely, profound and universal
    But we shall ever pen down lines till our minds become dry'....

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