A Whiff Of Poison! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

A Whiff Of Poison!

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I see no one I love, I see no friend around,
All I see is deceptive souls and devious minds
A whiff of poison in the air
I see flowers bleeding
I wonder why the nightingales don't sing anymore
Polluted hearts filled with acrimony
Resentment deeply embedded in the soul
Enmity in the name of friendship
What has come of loyalty?
What has happened to the sunshine?
How did the kindness end?
All that is left within is rancour
The loyalty buried deep in the dearth
Living life tenaciously with treachery in heart
With layers of dust covering the conscience
The seeds of betrayal root in my heart
I hope someone erase the pain of wile
Maybe someday someone will dig up the treasure
From deep within my heart
And share it with another lonely soul
May the gems of loyalty sparkle again.
May the breeze of goodness travel again.

© Aarzoo Mehek.

A Whiff Of Poison!
Sunday, December 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: conscience,deception,poison
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2015

I see flowers bleeding I wonder why the nightingales don't sing anymore Polluted hearts filled with acrimony Resentment deeply embedded in the soul Enmity in the name of friendship ...-oh beautiful observations and wonderful graphic. would you tell me from where do u collect such graphics. very very nice. thank you very much. tony

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 December 2015

I've a sketch in my mind and browse the net for the perfect picture which compliments my poem. Thanks a ton for appreciating my work.

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Rob Lamberton 20 January 2023

"May the gems of loyalty sparkle again. May the breeze of goodness travel again." I'm glad the poison was not fatal!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 January 2022

A poignant poem! I will revisit with a meticulous review.

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 July 2016

Hi Aaarzoo, Wafaa ke badle bewafaee is the order of our times! Beautiful poem reflecting human nature engulfed in bigotry!

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 20 February 2016

You are a great genius Aarzoo. you have a great way through your words and a deep insight about life, experience and your desires and wishes. every aspect of life that we come across can be found in your poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 January 2016

Oh! Deeply embedded; but, out there someone cares for you. Nice work.

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