A Wish...! Poem by Devanshu Patel

A Wish...!

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दुआ...!

इतना ही सही, मगर साथ तो था
अनजान ही सही, पर खास तो था
दुआ हैं, "मेरी हर दुआ में उसका नाम हो"
एक सच्चे दोस्त होने का एहसास तो था....!


A Wish...!

It's okay, if the friendship lasted this much
It's okay, unknown she was but had a unique touch
I pray, " she will be there in my every prayer"
'I have a true friend' there used to be a faith such...!

©Devanshu Patel
10/27/18

A Wish...!
Saturday, October 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer,wish
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is for a beloved unknown friend of mine whom I have not seen but I feel like I know her/him for ages...! Our friendship started a before few days...unfortunately it didn't last long...I don't know.. why.. but somehow I have lost that amiable track... which was filling my heart with unknown pleasure!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susheela Shiju 30 October 2018

well penned dear Devanushu! 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2018

Unknowing truth still has right attitude. Friendship is felt very well. A name included in prayer motivates mind. An excellent poem is well drafted. A true friend has faith always....10

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Dave Walker 27 October 2018

Prayers and friends, good combination. A great poem.

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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