A Women Poem by rachel sanler

There is potential in your writing style. You have the basic rhymes. Some advice whatch your spelling Nice keep going

Dear Rachel, I hope I didn’t give you a headache with my 666 comments haha. I really like your poems, and my aim is to try to put them in their perfect shape with you. So let’s start with... the title; A Women: 'The noun and the word that modify that noun must agree in number.' So the title can either be ‘A Woman’, ‘Women’ or just ‘Woman’ This is an Idea of how your poem can look like: Woman There’s a woman Who’s living her life She always dreamt She’ll be an incredible wife Every night She wonders about What she’s learnt That day, yes There’s gonna be a man Leading her way But she’s to believe With trust and faith That this is the way For her to be saved Please read my comments I sent you in your next poem, I hope you find them usuful. Cheers!