'A Writing Passion' Poem by seema gupta

'A Writing Passion'

Rating: 5.0


On the bright tail of the lake
Contribution from the bright rays
I put part of the writing passion
holding my loves finger
Hiding from the world's eyes
I hav to go flying across the sky
with stars filled in my hands
flowing in your love ocean
wanna go deep down high
When you step down gently
in deep water of the lake
go quietly tocuhing your lips
These spry waves falling shy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 23 September 2009

ammmmmazing! beautifully penned! nice imageries! 10+

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 28 October 2017

This is more wonderful poem

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 May 2013

wonderful poem with lovely desire very nice 10

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 May 2010

loved this: I hav to go flying across the sky with stars filled in my hands flowing in your love ocean really beautiful

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Akram Awadat 21 December 2009

fantastic poem very beautiful lines

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 09 November 2009

the feeling well captured and presented

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