Abandoned Poem by qspinner spins
Abandoned
ever since i was three
i’ve always wanted to be free
NO! NO! NO!
mom used to say
you can’t GO!
there’s no way
you can’t eat that popsicle
you can’t ride that bicycle
you can’t play with that kid
he’s a friend you must rid
how i’ve hated those words
how i wanted to be free as a bird
now that i m isolated
how i was devostated
when mom never return home one day
i waited by the door
on the stone cold floor
cring of the mistakes
that i never meant to make
how i’ miss those words of love
that mom used to say
those words of love
that i would pay
to hear again
OMG....what a poem.....I could feel your feelings....it definitely touched me.....it's going to my poem list....10/10.....nice write
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5/4/2024 6:25:01 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I really can't use conventional language to comment on this poem. I'm not going to say its a great poem. But I am going to say that its worth more than a great poem to me. That's because I'm a man and my mother is dead. Those are the only two facts that matter. GW62