Abortion Poem by Rini Shibu

Abortion

Rating: 4.4


Conceiving a dream and desire of a woman
But  if it's a result  of a rape or incest
A trauma which she carries  life long
When her purity is robbed off.

Effects of social stigma and the shame
Leads to stress and mental depression
This battle in the brain that roots
In every woman who is a victim of a rape.

Whether to give birth when father is unknown
An unintended pregnancy which is unwanted
Worst thing which she don't want to remember
The only option and choice left is 'the abortion'.

But is that going to wipe out the problems
How to kill a life which is the God's creation
The foetus like her a victim of the crime now
An unborn who has equal rights to live.

Will anyone accept and welcome her in life?
Are you ready to adopt that child?
Will you treat that innocent baby as your child?
The unanswered questions and endless pains.

Protect her life and support her mentally
Is the  plead of every woman in this world
Encourage her to face the life boldly and
Allow her to choose peacefully, it's her right.

Thursday, June 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: abortion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 15 June 2017

Hi Rini, A very pertinent question you have raised here. I believe that the question should be left to her to answer. For, she is the absolute owner of her body. Instead of poking all these questions of morality before her, we should try and instill in her courage to take the decision, which she thinks, is right. We should make her bold enough to stand by her decision. We should respect her enough so that she never has an occasion to remember the unpleasant decision.. This is what is due by us, every individual member of a responsible society. Very bold, relevent and responsible poem. True to the bold Rini. A 10+ for this boldness.

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Thanks Mr.Unni for your comments

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Robert Murray Smith 02 May 2018

This poem poses the problems associated with abortion. The answers remain with each woman A complexity of unwanted sperms is not easily resolved..+++10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 November 2017

Rini you have chosen a theme of paramount importance in the present society.. very brilliantly drafted poem

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 24 September 2017

yeah society taken to task. difficult choices indeed. you are deeply concerned indeed. keep up the good work -the voice of conscience

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Rini Shibu 24 September 2017

Thanks for reading

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Stephani Kievaughan 23 September 2017

empathy grasped unbiased and pure for both your heart it is a good one indeed.

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thanks a lot Stephanie.. Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

This ia a burning issue against obortion that you have inscribed touchingly. Victim of rape and social stigma compels a woman to do this but it is a great sin. We must protect her life. Beautifully penned.

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Rini Shibu 21 August 2017

Thank you so much Kumar for reading

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