Vicarious Pleasure Poem by Rini Shibu

Vicarious Pleasure

Rating: 5.0


Saplings and trees so wild and mysterious
You took me to the magical woods
Twisted roots and mossy rocks
Enchanted my imagination
Vicarious pleasure which you provided
Lying  on those mustard flowers
Promises we made
To make our dreams a reality..
Walking on your footsteps early in the morning
Through those wooden footbridge
Sound of water underneath
Glimpse of mountain ranges under bright blue sky
Nightingale singing songs of love
Far across the meadows
Where Sheeps  rearing 
Smell of steam still in the air
Our first journey along those valleys
Fabulous view of Castles, hamlets and church bells through the oaks
Beautiful flowers by the river side
Moments that takes me to wistful mood.

Vicarious Pleasure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeeb Alfateh 10 July 2019

Walking on your footsteps early in the morning Through those wooden footbridge Sound of water underneath Glimpse of mountain ranges under bright blue sky Nightingale singing songs of love Far across the meadows beautiful and great write great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rini Shibu 10 July 2019

Thanks Adeeb

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 July 2019

Twisted roots and mossy rocks/Enchanted my imagination....sparkling expression! Many congratulations for this beautiful work of yours being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Rini Shibu 10 July 2019

Thanks Dillip

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Lamar Cole 10 July 2019

Congratulations on your wonderful poem Vicarious Pleasure being selected as Member Poem Of The Day.

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Rob Lamberton 13 July 2023

Reminds me of sharing special moments with my special someone a world away but yet feeling so close. Great poem! Thank you!

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Chinedu Dike 06 August 2019

Very deep and passionate poem. I loved the visionary impact of flow of your rendition. A beautiful creation written from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Rini.

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Jane Campion 04 August 2019

Love and nature combine to produce a wonderful poem.

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Rajnish Manga 10 July 2019

Lying on those mustard flowers Promises we made To make our dreams a reality.... //..... A fascinating landscape which transports the reader into a truly enchanting world even if it brings vicarious pleasure. Thanks a lot, Rini, with a bunch of good wishes.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 July 2019

Simply splendid poem of the day, dear Ma’am Rini. Congratulations for being selected....10++++

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