Abyss Poem by austin marshall

Abyss

Rating: 5.0


Life is an eternal abyss,

trapped in a unbreakable cage.

Hiding every moment,

with phycoitic rage.



Devious plots around me,

freezing to the bone.

Chains surround my heart,

destined to be alone.



Fading away from humanity,

dark memories closing in.

Losing my remaining sanity,

compulsive lies combined with uncontrollable sin.



Trapped in a cinamatic void,

drama and pain reside.

Agonizing screams, demonic plagues,

all within the divide.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 April 2009

''Life is an eternal abyss'', a wonderful start. Thematic and philosophical though but very true. Trapped in a cinamatic void, drama and pain reside. Agonizing screams, demonic plagues, all within the divide. A meaningful end too. A definite 10 for this exceptional work, Austin. Keep up the good work. Best Wishes Naseer

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~ Jon London ~ 01 March 2009

Fantastic imagery swims across the page, nice work.10

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