Treasure Island

Shian Daley


My life is like an Abyss
So dark, cold and lonely
With no one to talk to
Sometimes it's nice
Because no one is there to hurt you

The more I feel pleased with myself
Is the more other people suffer
They try to take me out
But I just wanna stay in this gutter

So I just silently sit there
Never wanting to go home,
Maybe one day I will get out
Of there
Then maybe... JUST MAYBE I
won't be so alone

Submitted: Monday, April 28, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, April 29, 2014

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Im in a dark place right now so the abyss just popped in my head it symbolizes what I have to go through in these times...

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  • John Westlake (4/30/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    A sad poem, I hope one day you will rise up and fulfil whatever your destiny is. Depression and such can be beaten and you are youg enough and i'm sure strong enough to beat it. Wrting can and will help you so keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Colleen Courtney (4/29/2014 12:05:00 AM)

    Depression is such a lonely place to be. I hope things turn better soon for you. Writing helps and you did a great job with this! (Report) Reply

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